More Writing Samples for the 3rd Mock Exam

Here are three more English writing samples for the 3rd mock exam.




1.

It was a rainny summer, which made the seed of love growing. Crystal didn’t like a raining day at all because she thougth it was a trouble to take an umbrella while walking . That day, Crystal was walking aon her way home with a bad ood because she had just broke up with her ex-boyfriend due to he had fallen in love with another girl. However, it never rains but pours, a strng wind roared by, which made her umbrella broken and blowed it away. Feeling embarrassed and upset, Crystal really wanted to cry, but he chocked back her tears finally. Then she put her purse on her haed to avoid the rain fell on her and started dto run as fast as she can that she could go back to her home as soon as possible But she was running too quickly to see a man walkign toward to her, she bumped into the man’s chest and fell down on the street. Crystal felt extremely hurt both her body and heart, so burst out crying on the site immediately.


“I am sorry,” the man, Mark, said to Crystal. It was not until Crystal see Mark’s face util she raise her head up. Crystal was s oshocked! Mar’s handsome was beyond desciption and Crystal fell in love with him at the first sight. Mark old Crystal hat he was sorry for leting she cry so he waned to buy a cup of coffee for she for apology. Ten years after that, Mark become Crystal’s husband! Now Crystal loves rainny day very much. She always looks at the view outside the window on a rainny day, memorying the day that she met Mark at the first time. (287 words) (13.5)


2.

It was a raining Saturday. Sandy walked on the street alone with her favorite umbrella. Since she was going to have a job interview, Sandy had a nervous expression on her face.

Suddenly, a strong wind blew through. Thus, Sandy walked back a few steps and, even worse, her umbrella, which couldn’t withstand the severe wind, turned inside out. No matter how hard Sandy tried to fix the umbrella, it just didn’t work out. With her umbrella totally broken and her beautiful dresses completely wet, Sandy couldn’t help crying out loud. However, there was not much time left for her interview; therefore, Sandy wiped her tears and kept on waling with her bag on her head. She walked as fast as she could, lest she should be late. Unfortunately, she accidentally ran into a man. Both of them fall down on the ground with a loud “Bang.”

Sandy apologized and much to her surprise, the man said it was fine and he asked Sandy to share the umbrella with him.

The man was very gentle and humorous. They talked delightfully. However, something strange happened. The man said he was going to a place where Sandy had her job interview.

Out of Sandy’s expectation, the man was her job interviewer!

In the end, Sandy got her job. She thought it was extremely lucky for her to broke the umbrella. Otherwise, she wouldn’t have the job and meet a handsome man by chance. (241 words) (15)


3.

It was one of those rainy days that Benna hated the most. Rain drops poured from the sky as if they were bullets trying to get to their targets. Benna’s new Dior skirt was soaked, and she couldn’t help but swearing out loud. To keep herself calm, she made herself imagine that she was embraced by the warm sunshine. Indulging in her own thoughts, she didn’t notice that the rain were gaining stronger, and the wind were blowing franctically around her. Suddenly, a strong wind hit her, and blew up her pink umbrella. Not wanting to buy a new one, she just ran as fast as she could in order to get home immediately.

While running on the street, rain drops shot into her eyes, and made her sight go into a blur. Ignoring those rain drops, she kept on running. Too exhausted to see who was in front of her, she bumped into a man mistakenly. When she was about to apologize for her reckless behave, she couldn’t stop but to gaze at the attractive figure in front of her. The man had dark-blue eyes, and a lovely smile that could kill nearly all the women in the world. She let her words out separately, since she was so nervous that she couldn’t speak properly.

After apologizing, she thought she had better start running home. However, the handsome man grabbed her arms when she was going to walk away. HE said that he could walk her hoe, since he had an umbrella. Surprised by the sweet act, contentment radiated from her expression. “Maybe it wasn’t so bad to have a rainy day!” she thought to herself, since anything could happen after suffering such a misterious day. (288 words) (16)