An Accident--Two Essays by Students

The following are two essays by students for the writing task on their practice test Meow-meow 6. The essays have been roughly modified.

Writing task:



提示:請根據本圖寫一篇短文說明圖中情境為何，第一段描述圖中發生的意外，第二段寫出接下來可能發生何事。

Jane was seriously hurt in a car accident on her way home. Directly hit by a careless motorcyclist while getting into her car, she flew several miles away and had a scrape on her head. With blood rolling down her face, she almost fainted. Fortunately, a group of teenagers passed by, witnessed the whole process of this miserable accident and came to help her. Not only did they take the motorcyclist to the police, but they also hailed a taxi to take her to the hospital. One man even took pictures with his camera to provide evidence for the police Though Jane was so feeble that she could do nothing but lean against a car, she was aware that enthusiastic people were helping her get through the hard time.

Jane’s condition turned better after several days of hospitalization. Though it will take her a period of time to go back to normal life, she wasn’t afraid at all. Instead, she wore a smile on her face every day and hoped that she could leave the hospital soon. She was also grateful to those teenagers. Without them, she would have died in the car accident absolutely.

(195 words) (3033蔡景勻1) (15) 

 

Earlier this morning, John and Claire were on their way to the museum located in the suburbs. It should only take one and a half hour to get there, but they were delayed. It was all because of an accident they ran into during their drive. They hit a woman, Susan, on the back. With a blink of an eye, she was on the ground and her head started to bleed. The couple got out of the car immediately to check if Susan was alright. Thankfully, two pedestrians were passing by and helped hem call for the ambulance. One of the passersby, Tom, was taking some pictures in case that the police ever needed them. Meanwhile, Claire took a piece of cloth from the car and put it on Susan’s forehead trying to stop the bleeding.

Within a few minutes, the ambulance arrived. The paramedics soon carried Susan into the ambulance and then took her to the hospital. After some checks, Susan was fine. She didn’t have concussion or any other bad symptoms either. As for John and Claire, they still go to the museum after leaving the hospital. (174 words) (311唐浩維) (13)