A beautiful sentence from a student

When I was reading students' compositions, I came across a beautiful sentence. The topic of the composition is "What Makes a Good Friend?" And here is a sentence appearing at the end of the composition by Tsai-hsiuen (沈采萱): If we can find true friends during our life, then we already see the most beautiful scene in our life.
I changed its last part into: then we already see one of the most beautiful scenes in our life. I know for teenagers friends are everything; however, to me, the love among family members, the affection between teachers and students, the compassion for people in need, a random act of kindness, these are all the most beautiful scenes in our life. In fact, I can list more.