2012年5月1日 星期二

The Most Influential Sentence-2--Essay by a Student

Here is another student's essay on the most influential sentence. This sentence is also one of my favorites.

提示:在人生的過程中,你覺得影響你最深的一句話是什麼?請寫一篇短文,第一段說明你在什麼情況下從什麼人口中(或哪本書中)聽到這一句話?第二段描述這句話對你所產生的影響。

“When you really want something, the whole universe conspires in helping you to achieve it,” the old king said to the shepherd.

This is a sentence etched in my mind since I read The Alchemist a few months ago. The alchemist, having been a world-famous classic for decades, is about a shepherd’s odyssey in pursuing his treasure. In fact, it was my second time to read this book. And it was at this second reading that I found such inspiring sentence that meant a lot to me.

The sentence from The Alchemist has been my motto ever since. I’ve always pined for entering a prestigious college, and the words from The Alchemist give me confidence, ensuring me that I’m not alone on my path toward my goal. But most important of all, I have to make an arduous effort to realize my dream. Gratefully, the sentence from The Alchemist has also been the spur that always pushes me forward. I believe as long as I want enough, somehow I can be successful, just like the shepherd in the story, never giving up and finally finding my treasure. (187 words) (30103)

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