2007年12月24日 星期一

model composition on the mock exam


On Sam's eighteenth birthday, Sam got a puppy from his parents. He was overjoyed for he had always wanted to have a pet. The next morning, Sam took his new puppy to the park. At the park Sam felt a little thirsty and went to buy a drink, leaving the puppy by a tree. But when Sam came back, he could not find his dog! What was left was only the pink-sparkling leash he had bought for the dog. Sam picked up the leash and cried sadly. He hadn't even introduced the puppy to his friends! The depressed Sam walked home mournfully, blaming himself for not taking good care of the dog. But when he got home, to his amazement, the puppy was sitting on the stairs waiting for him. Same was touched by the loyalty of the dog and swore that he would never neglect it again. Since then, Sam and his dog, now called Sammy, has been best friends.


(161 words) (Score: 15)



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